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wholock fanfic chapter 1

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the TARDIS shook vilontly as the skinny man in his pinstripe suit clenched the control panel and the dark haired girl in a well-fitted red jacket flopped backwards onto the seat behind her (she had learned to be stood near something soft when he put the controlls into random)"well then, martha jones," the doctor began when the room had ceased to rumble benith their feet."shall we see where we've ended up?" he winked at her with a wide cheeky grin before launching toward the door in exitement."hang on... we're in london!doctor, we havent moved!"martha sounded slightly dissapointedas she leaft the TARDIS behind the doctor,shutting the door behind her."No..No,we definatly moved,this IS london but something's different,i cant quite put my finger on it" he bent down, picking a blade of grass from a tuft that was pokeing out from the allyway where they had landed and sniffing it before standing up again."2012, i would say judgeing by the traffic"he told her ."or my that billboard."She pointed up at the looming sighn, foiling the Doctors plan to sound clever."well yeah,that to.but this just dosn't feel right,there's sommething in the air that just,s'like,hard to explain"he furrowed his brow in thought."have you got a microscope?" he asked randomly and martha let out a little giggle "no,doctor,i dont just carry a microsscope around with me." she told him through laughter that must have been contageous as the Doctor joined in as they leaft the allyway.

he licked the front of his teeth in thought be fore jolting a finger at the large bulding over the road with the letters st. barthoamu's hospital in big letters over the entrance "do you recon thay'll have one in there?" he asked quietly as if he was talking about an assasination target "I should hope so,its  a hospital!" the doctor smiled and retreved the phycic paper from his pocket and began walking swiftly towards the front desk."Jhon Smith" he held up the phycic paper to the woman who looked up from the computer screen and gave a friendly smile."Here to fix the computer in the lab, could you tell me where that is?" he smiled back,bringing out the dimples in his cheeks as he shoved the phycic paper back into his pocket "frit floor, scond corridor to the left, first room on the right?"she replied, twidleing her hair like a schoolgirl with a crush and looking dissapointed when martha shuffled into vew from behind him."thanks." he replied oblivoisly wilst walking off."She soo fanced you." martha sead loud enogh for him to hear but quet enogh for the women at the desk to pick up."really?"he questiond in a surprised tone."Yup." she replied without a doubt.

When they had finally got to the labertory after two wrong turnes and another ask for directions,a thought popped into Martha's head."What do we actally need a microscope for anyway?"she questioned
"i'll explain later"he sead quietly after he noticed the curly haired man with feline like eyes and sleek cheekboes leaning over a microscope with a beeping noise occuring from the computer next to him."Exuse me, are there any more of those microscopes in here?"
the Doctor adressed the man. "In there." the man replied without looking up , but directing a selender finger towards a couple of stacked boxes in the courner. the doctor wandered over and picked up a box before lifting it onto the table opasite the man who was still staring into the micrascope and setting it up.

after some time the beeping of the man's computer suddenly went up a pithch for one beep and then stopped,as a result , the man shouted "Yes!" ,makeing  the Doctor and martha jump and silenced their murmured conversation before grabbing the sample that had activated the beep along  with his coat and rushing out of the room in exitement."He," martha spoke when she was sure he was gone "was strange."

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(back in the tardis)

"I was right!"the doctor exlaimed "Im not sure how we got here, but i waaas right!" he looked especially pleased with himself "right about...?"martha questioned
"perrelell earth!"He spoke as if it was obvous "grass here is slightly different when you look closely,just slightly, but it's definatly parellel grass!" he told her in a jokeing tone "Come on then, its not often we get to see perellel london! let's see what's different!"he rushed toward the door, wandering if this is the same perrellel world that rose is trapped in.

They walked down an allyway across the road from the one that the TARDIS stood in, before allmost walking into the wall at the end."Oops.the doctor was confused,he could have sworn they used this shortcut erlier." he turned on his heel to walk back out but there was a figure stood blocking them.a fighure holding a gun."gimmie all your valubals!" the doctor and Martha exchanged a look before she started to remove her bracelet and the doctor his watch, but stopped when the heard a deep barratone voice behind the mugger."Or you could leave, or should i just call the police?" the tone was almost sarcasttic but the voice was familiar."I-i'll just shoot you then!" the mugger aimed his gun at the tall man with the feline eyes and sleek cheekbones "Oh really? go on then" the tall man stepped closer and his eyes narrowed.The gun now inches away from his chest"soot me." he told the mugger who looked relatively small compared to the tall and hansome man (who apparently had a death wish).

The mugger dropped the gun and shoved passed their savior, who did not make an attempt to stop him."thanks." breathed martha in relif "Your that man from the lab! remeber?!" the doctor interupted before frowning at the thought of a man risking his life to save two stranger's jewellry."How did you know he woulden't shoot you?" The doctor was concerned."ah spoke the mystery man in his deep voice, picking up the gun and holding it to his owen head."I know a real gun when i see one." he pulled the trigger and a small flame flickered from the end "a lot of criminals seem to be useing fake guns tese days. But then again, they're thick" he smiled "Sherlock Holmes" Sherlock held out a hand and watched the girl go wide eyed and a grin spread ove the outher man's face.
ok, well i dont really know where this is going, but hey,i never do :) hope you all like it and i hope you think i got all the characters right. sorry for all the spelling mistakes i have a mild dislexia (stupid imperfections!)

charicters not mine!! ther belong to the bbc - please dont sue me!!

there's no previous, this is the first :)
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estelle-yokai's avatar
I think you captured the Doctors and Marthas personality very well, there wasn't enough Sherlock yet to be able to tell if you got his personality equally well or not, but I guess we will see that in the next chapters.
I do not mind the spelling mistakes, I'm always unsure if my sentences make any sense at all.(Did THIS make any sense?)